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Vision: Winning Berkeley Haas MBA Essay Tip #1

A challenge applicants from legacy industries face is the disinvestment in the industry and the haphazard manner in which renewables are integrated into the operations. Applicants from these industries tend to focus on two noble and essential initiatives – education and renewable energy.

Vision

For the Berkeley Haas What makes you feel alive video essay, you might share a vision about a future – a future where education is affordable and accessible, renewable energy is mainstream, polluting industries operate outside the earth, or any sci-fi-themed (for now) narratives that benefit a large population.

Beyond Yourself 

Beyond Yourself – the leadership principle reiterated by Haas’s four defining leadership principles should be the guiding force behind setting up the context for the narrative.

One of the common themes is an extra-curricular, volunteering, or full-time engagement around Education. The challenge for applicants is the style of the script.

A written essay is different from a Video script.

How can you highlight your effort in bringing renewable energy or achieving certain milestones in educational initiatives?

Extra-Curricular in College (Examples)

A strong college extra-curricular – Pioneering projects still benefiting students is an excellent example to show IMPACT.

Some effective examples are: 

  1. Starting niche student clubs
  2. Fundraising initiatives with unconventional channels and strategies
  3. Technology/Consulting solutions that fundamentally changed the operations of an organization or the college initiatives
  4. Partnerships that increased the reach of the student clubs 

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