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Commentary: HBS MBA Leadership Essay (Non-Profit Applicants)

When I read a Harvard MBA Leadership Essay that requires influencing multiple stakeholders, I look at how the person is willing to compromise to achieve a target for the beneficiary. 

For example, in the Harvard MBA leadership essay on rural telecom in South Africa, the protagonist is a consultant working in a non-profit. He shares the challenges of operating an ISP in a low-income region. The incentives of the government and the ISP are not aligned to offer add-on services to this demographic, but for educational apps to reach this market and fill the gap of available good teachers, they need a reliable internet connection.

The Leadership essay starts with a solution, but like in any good essay, if there are no roadblocks or challenges, it is tough to capture the leadership traits that make an applicant unique.

For the essay, I have included communication and creativity as two leadership traits. 

Communication because – the proposal to create a cooperative was opposed by a competitor, citing regulatory issues. Only when the applicant creatively introduced an incentive and communicated with projections of future revenues did the problem get solved? 

Any essay that is a mix of idealistic goals with practical strategies is way more believable than narratives that are idealistic with little practical knowledge captured in the essay. 

Remember – Harvard is one of the most popular MBA programs in the world. 

Demonstrate your business acumen and cultural intelligence. 

This understanding is essential for non-profit applicants writing Harvard MBA Leadership essays.