The Why Stanford MBA essay is a great opportunity to highlight a cultural failure as motivation to pivot to a different employer, a different industry, or start a venture.
These cultural failures fall into three broad themes:
1) Excessive Risk-Taking
One client frustratingly shared how, in a major trading firm, there are processes to override the trading kill switch. When the risk taken by the trader crosses a particular threshold, the system notifies the applicant, and as a risk management professional, he is required to escalate the details to his Project Manager. Such processes were just a 'namesake' control to fend off regulators. The trader continued his splurges. Needless to say, the firm declared bankruptcy. PE/VC/IB applicants are known to use such narratives to share why they pivoted from a named brand to a start-up/mid-sized trading firm/fund house.
2) Conformity
Then, there are other extreme examples where conformity was rewarded. These are incentive structures seen in bureaucracy, govt. and legacy industries, where anyone who stands out too far away from the expected norms in expression, initiative(often against proactiveness), or work ethics is pruned in favor of a person who aligns with the culture. Govt applicants narrate such examples to cite their motivation for moving to corporate careers.
3) Growth costing sustainability
The most impressive essays are themed around examples where growth is pursued for the benefit of the few shareholders while deepening inequity in society. AI adoption at the cost of human agency, unemployment, and reversal of green energy milestones, and policy-driven inflation to keep the prices of assets high are all examples of pursuing growth at the cost of sustainability. MPP/MBA applicants typically use such policy themes to introduce their alternative vision.
In all such examples, the applicant had a previous tenure where they had an impact on the employer and the industry.
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